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Marked
- By Tracy Ames
- Published August 14, 2010
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IRE Scoville Scale: Tastefully Wicked
Damn social convention, take me as you wish.
Whatever pleases you, I simply want to be owned.
Gently restrain my wrist behind my back and claim my mouth as yours.
Rake your teeth down my neck. Whisper in my ear all the naughty things you’re going to do to me.
Take me to the bedroom. Undress me slowly.
Don’t devour my curves. I want to feel your lips on every inch of my newly exposed skin.
Kiss it. Lick it. Mark your territory.
Lay me on the bed, your naked body wedged heavily between my thighs. Your powerful hands press my hips into the mattress.
Lower your mouth to my breasts and suck until I feel your pre-cum slick head throbbing against my lips.
Rub it there. Again and again.
Tease me. Just inside. Tease my clit.
Tell me how wet I am.
Tell me what you’re going to do. I want to feel your words.
Each vowel...each consonant drizzle across my skin and pool where your cock tickles.
Inch inside of me, you tease.
Turn me over.
Pull me up on all fours.
Caress my back.
One hand on my hip, the other on my shoulder.
With one long sensual stroke, fill my pussy (your pussy) completely.
Own me. I’m yours.
As your momentum builds, tell me how good it feels.
Watch your gloss covered cock push between my beautiful brown lips.
Hear my body chant your praises.
Know that I’m struggling to accommodate your girth…yet I'd willingly suffer more if it pleases you.
You know what I need.
Both hands on my ass.
Smack it until my pussy sings and the fleshy mound of my ass stings.
I want to feel your weight bear down on me.
Grip my hair.
Pull me ceilingward til I'm flush against you.
Kiss my neck.
Make me beg for your inviolable mercy.
Deeper.
Moan my name into the soft curve of my neck.
Deeper.
Graffiti the Byzantine walls of my pussy with your warm cum.
Mmmmm....
Don’t move.
Allow me to milk you dry.
This is how I claim you.
Spread The Word
15 Responses to "Marked" 
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said this on 14 Aug 2010 3:30:10 PM CST
That was great! Wish I could write like this! :)
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said this on 14 Aug 2010 3:35:42 PM CST
Thanks Nakita. You can write...everyone can write when they put their minds to it. Think about what you like and go for it!
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said this on 14 Aug 2010 4:36:29 PM CST
That was great! Wish I could produce something like that in my procrastination lol! The only thing I get is tired LOL!
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said this on 14 Aug 2010 4:39:51 PM CST
Wow that was hot! I know you said we can write if we put our minds to it. But I definatley don't think I could have come up with anyhting close to what you just wrote.
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said this on 14 Aug 2010 5:19:53 PM CST
Great piece. I like the way your character turns the tables by the end of the work. It read somewhat like prose or long verse poetry.
At the beginning: "Mark your Territory" At the end: "This is how I claim you" Very good turn. |
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said this on 14 Aug 2010 5:36:49 PM CST
Thank you, J.L. I'm guilty of turning the tables quite a bit. No kidding I had someone get angry with me because they felt that I should have remained 'true' to the setup. That's boring.
Honestly I don't/didn't know how to describe the piece. It's sort of like long verse poetry but I'm NO poet. I'll leave poetry to the real poets...the experts. I know my limits. lol |
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said this on 14 Aug 2010 6:09:07 PM CST
tracy i love your pieces they always get me all hot and botherd....you are really good with making your words create images when i read it...
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said this on 14 Aug 2010 8:40:34 PM CST
"weight"
I'm glad you kept the sing/sting line. On the first reading I wasn't so sure about the "Byzantine" line but then I thought of two reasons why it's a ceeper. One crude and one a bit more sophisticated. |
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said this on 14 Aug 2010 9:40:54 PM CST
Did I really type "ceeper" for keeper? Jebus.
Crude reason - because Byzantine and "jizz in me" are not so far apart. Less crude - because in that moment all imagery is permitted. |
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said this on 14 Aug 2010 10:11:52 PM CST
No worries, Barney. Hell, I missed "weight". This is why I should let Lydia read over stuff before I post. :) She'll get around to it later. You're reasoning isn't so bad. I like imagery.
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said this on 19 Aug 2010 12:37:21 AM CST
Oh that was nice, Tracy. I could almost feel your Byzantine walls as my hardness throbbed beneath my laptop as I read this story.
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said this on 20 Aug 2010 1:29:35 AM CST
Wow that was hot. Perfectly paced and so erotic. Well down.
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said this on 01 Sep 2010 10:35:28 AM CST
That Was Awesome!!!! Hotttt!!!!! What A Way To Give Words Life!!!!
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said this on 19 Sep 2010 5:35:58 PM CST
love it , my husband loved it !
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said this on 19 Sep 2010 6:16:18 PM CST
Aw, thanks everyone! I'm so glad you liked this piece. "Marked" was a pleasure to write.
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