My Big Filthy Mouth and The Art of Repression
- By Tracy Ames
- Published November 8, 2009
Tracy Ames
Mrs. Ames is an international bestselling author of interracial erotic fiction and a former columnist for several newsletters and magazines.
A native of the San Francisco Bay Area, Tracy currently split time between CT & New York City with her husband, children and a host of pets.
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This may come as a shock to most of you but I have a dirty mouth. It’s not a normal dirty mouth, I mean it’s really really filthy. I once had an editor who was certain a female hadn’t written my sex scenes. “Women don’t write like this,” said the guy.
I do! I write what I like with the exception of anal. For those scenes I consult Precious; she helps me in that regard. I take her my work and she tells me if I’ve got it wrong & walks me through correcting the horrifying steps of butt-fuckery whilst I sit rocking and repeating “bloody hell” until her lips stop moving. Oh I’m getting faint just thinking about it.
Okay, back on topic: My big filthy mouth. So, my fellow author friends, we call ourselves “The Nut Bunch”, were chatting about purple prose. Mind you, these folks come from all genres. Surprisingly, I was voted the dirtiest but I’m appealing the ruling. It just reeks of Victorian bias.
One thing we all agreed on was that none of us write our mother’s romance novels and we’re damn proud of it! We started throwing out lame lingo from some of those novels and by the end (like most writers) we’d assembled teams and established rules and a point system for our little game. Who could come up with the most horrific lingo ever found in erotic romance. Below are a few terms I haven’t repressed.
“delicate flower”
“hide the sausage”
“luncheon truncheon”
“meat injecting”
“chucking the spam javelin”
“spearing the bearded clam”
“getting stabbed with the beef bayonet”
“rumpy pumpy”
“nookie”
“bonking”
“giving the dog a bone”
If your face is drawn up like a prune then your reaction is spot-on. I felt the same way…and my team won. It makes you wonder if these people have in fact had sex. Ewan Morrison once said: Write from experience, not fantasy. Fantastical sex scenes are hilarious, shallow and awful….If you don’t have the experiences to enrich your writing, go out and get them or stop trying to write sex scenes.
I wouldn’t go that far but I see his point. Here's where you all come in. If you have some off the wall lingo/terms you’d like to add to the list please comment away!
BTW: Greg if you’re reading this (and I know you are) please know that if you ever creep up on me talking about “Stabbing my delicate flower with your beef bayonet” it’ll be the last thing you do. I know how you think...;-)
I do! I write what I like with the exception of anal. For those scenes I consult Precious; she helps me in that regard. I take her my work and she tells me if I’ve got it wrong & walks me through correcting the horrifying steps of butt-fuckery whilst I sit rocking and repeating “bloody hell” until her lips stop moving. Oh I’m getting faint just thinking about it.
Okay, back on topic: My big filthy mouth. So, my fellow author friends, we call ourselves “The Nut Bunch”, were chatting about purple prose. Mind you, these folks come from all genres. Surprisingly, I was voted the dirtiest but I’m appealing the ruling. It just reeks of Victorian bias.
One thing we all agreed on was that none of us write our mother’s romance novels and we’re damn proud of it! We started throwing out lame lingo from some of those novels and by the end (like most writers) we’d assembled teams and established rules and a point system for our little game. Who could come up with the most horrific lingo ever found in erotic romance. Below are a few terms I haven’t repressed.
“delicate flower”
“hide the sausage”
“luncheon truncheon”
“meat injecting”
“chucking the spam javelin”
“spearing the bearded clam”
“getting stabbed with the beef bayonet”
“rumpy pumpy”
“nookie”
“bonking”
“giving the dog a bone”
If your face is drawn up like a prune then your reaction is spot-on. I felt the same way…and my team won. It makes you wonder if these people have in fact had sex. Ewan Morrison once said: Write from experience, not fantasy. Fantastical sex scenes are hilarious, shallow and awful….If you don’t have the experiences to enrich your writing, go out and get them or stop trying to write sex scenes.
I wouldn’t go that far but I see his point. Here's where you all come in. If you have some off the wall lingo/terms you’d like to add to the list please comment away!
BTW: Greg if you’re reading this (and I know you are) please know that if you ever creep up on me talking about “Stabbing my delicate flower with your beef bayonet” it’ll be the last thing you do. I know how you think...;-)
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7 Responses to "My Big Filthy Mouth and The Art of Repression " 
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said this on 08 Nov 2009 9:26:06 AM CDT
I don't know. I might have to use one of those phrases when trying to seduce my husband. For example, "Please Big Daddy, stab me with your with your beef bayonet." Or, while in the throes of passion exclaiming, "Yes! Yes! Find my pearl! Spear my bearded clam." I can go on ALL day.
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said this on 08 Nov 2009 3:21:16 PM CDT
LOL! No don't do it. Please don't do all day, I'm dying over here. I can imagine your hubby's face, lol. "Fund my pearl"?!? Hoy cow, I'll have to add that one to my arsenal. Thanks!
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said this on 08 Nov 2009 10:04:25 AM CDT
Hi Tracy! I'll raise your flower, my delicate peach. I don't know what it is about peaches but it seems many folks like to associate the female genitalia with it and many other fruits. Maybe because it's sticky and sweet? I dunno, I haven't gone down on a woman, but I'm not sure even the cleanest lower lips taste as sweet as a peach.
Anyway, about blue language, it's strange, considering what I do to earn a buck, but I tend to find, for me, writing sex is the hardest. For the reasons you explained above and more. I've had my fair share of sex in reality, some boring, some a tad over adventurous but translating that to the page can be daunting for me. So, lately I've been wondering if I'm truly an erotica writer because I tend to deal more with inner emotions, rather than the physical expression of them--what is that, romance? I don't think I'm a romance writer either. I guess it will take time, I'm still learning how to draw the kink out of me and onto the page. |
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said this on 08 Nov 2009 3:47:41 PM CDT
Is 'sticky' a word we should use towards the female genitalia? Sticky? Why is it that the female genitalia is associated with fruit? I'll have to research that.
Hey, I don't consider what I write to be true erotica. It's a combo of erotica and romance in the sense that it doesn't involve dull-eyed females screwing dull-eyed males in a painfull world of sadness and low self-esteem. Again, I was reading Ewan Morrison and he put it best:...ethically good sex with “wholesome, well-rounded characters” (erotica) and nasty cheap sex with anonymous bodies (porn). I wouldn't call all my characters "wholesome". That's a bit far reaching. Yes, it's difficult for to translate the physical elements of a sex scene onto the page. I wrote a whole cheat sheet on it. When it comes to the sex lanaguage I employ, I normally go balls to the wall and then slowly pull back to until it meets a happy middle whilst staying true to the story at large. Remember: Stimulus- Reaction- Perception- Emotion- Response |
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said this on 08 Nov 2009 11:03:15 AM CDT
LOL! Oh Tracy how do you do it? I am crying! First off those terms are horrendous. I don't think those words were used in our mother's romance novels. Maybe our grandmother's. That is hilarious.
“chucking the spam javelin” Seriously?!? Oh geez! BTW the way Tracy you do have a filthy mouth but I love it. |
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said this on 08 Nov 2009 3:07:21 PM CDT
Steph, these were just a few we came up with. The others were more on the line of what we were talking about on FB the other day (the whole apple bit) Yuck!
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said this on 08 Nov 2009 3:47:48 PM CDT
Oh! I had forgotten about the apple bit. That was hilarious wasn't it. And to think someone would think that would be an appealing description. Thanks for the laugh Tracy. I needed it.
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