You Say Tomato, He Says SCRUMPETS!: The Male Orgasm
- By Tracy Ames
- Published June 21, 2010
Tracy Ames
Mrs. Ames is an international bestselling author of interracial erotic fiction and a former columnist for several newsletters and magazines.
A native of the San Francisco Bay Area, Tracy currently split time between CT & New York City with her husband, children and a host of pets.
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It’s a known fact that women love to hear or see men ejaculate. Some guys are really cute and cuddly when they’re coming to fruition while some have ‘O’ faces best suited for the record books. I knew I could be with Greg when I didn’t erupt into gut-wrenching laughter when I saw his ‘O’ face.
Our first tango together ended in a streaming verse of expletives and a quick prayer to Santa Claus or was it the Easter Bunny. Whatever, he was fun and his ‘O’ face was hot so I decided to keep him.
The guy I dated before Greg sounded like a malfunctioning sprinkler ….sort of like "key-key-key-key-key." Needless to say, doggystyle was my go-to position with him. At least then I could suppress my laughter and it fed his ego to see me bite the pillow. He never had a clue.
And then there was the macho screamer with childhood regression issues. He’d release this catastrophic howling scream then cover his mouth like a cartoon character—his glassy eyes widened and his face frozen in fear, shaking his head like "Oh my God, you took my cum".
It was distracting. And there were a couple of times I swore he cried.
I don't know how a male orgasm feels like and I haven’t slept with a lot of men, but I will share my observations based on my experiences and those of my acquaintances. These are the odd ones....we'll get the pretty ones later.
The Aspiring Porn Star: These men have muscle behind them. Don’t get me wrong, I love Lexington Steele but if Greg came as loudly as he does I’d wear earplugs. These men are normally the same guys who’ll rip the condom off and do their business on the nearest surface, preferably your face.
The Pirate: These men are enthralling to witness in the wild. It’s like … bam, bam, bam *face contorts* “Arrr! Eek! Arrr!!” followed by a lot of unintelligible muttering and endless yelling. I’m dying laughing just thinking about it!
The Phantom of the Opera: Theatrics is the name of the game. And done properly, it can be fairly entertaining. They can start a number of ways but most commonly begin with screaming as loud as humanly possible in a high falsetto. From there it’s fist clenching the chest, snatching the condom off with pretentious bravado, and wanking like a Tony Award depends upon it. Here, I was still distracted … I kept waiting for the curtain to fall.
The Silent but Deadly: This one is troubling on two levels. First, I couldn't tell if the guy was pleased because he was whispering. Second, he sounded like a wounded animal … and not in a good way. It starts, I think, with a gentle “Oh God” then a grunt, a wheeze, a shimmy and shake, and finally a shyly uttered, “Well, that was good.” What was good, Mofo!?!
The Dog Whisperer: Sit Ubu sit … good dog! Rightfully, this one freaks some ladies out. It builds slowly from a couple of cute pants—to a growl and scowl—and ends with a deep heavy “Woof Woof Woof!” My girlfriend was so afraid that she literally rolled on the floor laughing. Laughter is her coping skill.
The Lemon Head: Imagine sucking on a lemon, drinking skunky beer, and realizing you've stepped in dog poo while someone sticks a piece of raw ginger up your butt. That’s the facial expression that comes with The Lemon Head! Everything sort of scrunches to the center of the face, toes curl or flare out, then it peaks with a gravely pinched tight “Oh shit.” Oh shit, indeed! I couldn’t help but laugh …
The WTF?: This one is the rarest of the bunch therefore it normally blindsides you. It begins quite ordinary; really naughty dirty talk, heavy breathing, more dirty talk…then things go from sugar to shit in a hurry. Here’s the build up: copious amounts of slurred words, some twitching, inaudible embellishments, an “Arrr!” left from his pirate past, panting panting and more panting, gripping inanimate objects real or imagined.
Here’s where it gets weird. It’s like he focuses on an obscure word and repeats it loud, louder, loudest while spazzing out.
Example: “oh scrumpets, scrumpets, SCRUmpets, SCRUmpets, SCRUMPETS, SCRUMPETS, OOOHH BLOODY SCRUMPETSSSSS!!!!” *High pitched wheeze*
By now your bearings are off. You need to refocus--regroup--weigh your options: fight or flight. It's up to you. Just remember, there can be only one survivor.
Feel free to share your observations. :)

Our first tango together ended in a streaming verse of expletives and a quick prayer to Santa Claus or was it the Easter Bunny. Whatever, he was fun and his ‘O’ face was hot so I decided to keep him.
The guy I dated before Greg sounded like a malfunctioning sprinkler ….sort of like "key-key-key-key-key." Needless to say, doggystyle was my go-to position with him. At least then I could suppress my laughter and it fed his ego to see me bite the pillow. He never had a clue.
And then there was the macho screamer with childhood regression issues. He’d release this catastrophic howling scream then cover his mouth like a cartoon character—his glassy eyes widened and his face frozen in fear, shaking his head like "Oh my God, you took my cum".
It was distracting. And there were a couple of times I swore he cried.
I don't know how a male orgasm feels like and I haven’t slept with a lot of men, but I will share my observations based on my experiences and those of my acquaintances. These are the odd ones....we'll get the pretty ones later.
The Aspiring Porn Star: These men have muscle behind them. Don’t get me wrong, I love Lexington Steele but if Greg came as loudly as he does I’d wear earplugs. These men are normally the same guys who’ll rip the condom off and do their business on the nearest surface, preferably your face.
The Pirate: These men are enthralling to witness in the wild. It’s like … bam, bam, bam *face contorts* “Arrr! Eek! Arrr!!” followed by a lot of unintelligible muttering and endless yelling. I’m dying laughing just thinking about it!
The Phantom of the Opera: Theatrics is the name of the game. And done properly, it can be fairly entertaining. They can start a number of ways but most commonly begin with screaming as loud as humanly possible in a high falsetto. From there it’s fist clenching the chest, snatching the condom off with pretentious bravado, and wanking like a Tony Award depends upon it. Here, I was still distracted … I kept waiting for the curtain to fall.
The Silent but Deadly: This one is troubling on two levels. First, I couldn't tell if the guy was pleased because he was whispering. Second, he sounded like a wounded animal … and not in a good way. It starts, I think, with a gentle “Oh God” then a grunt, a wheeze, a shimmy and shake, and finally a shyly uttered, “Well, that was good.” What was good, Mofo!?!
The Dog Whisperer: Sit Ubu sit … good dog! Rightfully, this one freaks some ladies out. It builds slowly from a couple of cute pants—to a growl and scowl—and ends with a deep heavy “Woof Woof Woof!” My girlfriend was so afraid that she literally rolled on the floor laughing. Laughter is her coping skill.
The Lemon Head: Imagine sucking on a lemon, drinking skunky beer, and realizing you've stepped in dog poo while someone sticks a piece of raw ginger up your butt. That’s the facial expression that comes with The Lemon Head! Everything sort of scrunches to the center of the face, toes curl or flare out, then it peaks with a gravely pinched tight “Oh shit.” Oh shit, indeed! I couldn’t help but laugh …
The WTF?: This one is the rarest of the bunch therefore it normally blindsides you. It begins quite ordinary; really naughty dirty talk, heavy breathing, more dirty talk…then things go from sugar to shit in a hurry. Here’s the build up: copious amounts of slurred words, some twitching, inaudible embellishments, an “Arrr!” left from his pirate past, panting panting and more panting, gripping inanimate objects real or imagined.
Here’s where it gets weird. It’s like he focuses on an obscure word and repeats it loud, louder, loudest while spazzing out.
Example: “oh scrumpets, scrumpets, SCRUmpets, SCRUmpets, SCRUMPETS, SCRUMPETS, OOOHH BLOODY SCRUMPETSSSSS!!!!” *High pitched wheeze*
By now your bearings are off. You need to refocus--regroup--weigh your options: fight or flight. It's up to you. Just remember, there can be only one survivor.
Feel free to share your observations. :)

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27 Responses to "You Say Tomato, He Says SCRUMPETS!: The Male Orgasm" 
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 6:49:27 AM CDT
Wow. So. Umm. Right. So umm none of them seem hot so wouldn't you just laugh on every one of them? I'm confused like what do you do in this situation? I guess that gets rid of the "no sex before marriage" that my mom has been pushing for my entire life. Damn, imagine being stuck with some who is a Dog Whisperer?
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 6:59:14 AM CDT
Erica, maybe I should change the title to "The Bad & The Ugly". I didn't list the pleasent orgasms...only the bad ones. I'll sort out the good later this week.
Yeah, I girlfriend called me from the guy's closet she was laughing so hard. You just keep your legs closed. If you end up with a Dog Whisperer then...well, at least you have love. |
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 8:39:37 AM CDT
Well I'll be John Brown......didn't know of the vast array of categories. Laugh at...I mean learn something everyday!
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 6:29:20 PM CDT
The Silent but Deadly has been the cause of several late night or early morning calls from girlfriends to either pick them up or have cab fare money they are on the way.
WTH is a combination of Silent but Deadly and the Dog Whisperer but on the other hand one of the best laughs of my ENTIRE life. When I tell J about this one he had the nerve to say he "saved" me from sexual repression failing to note I told that fool to lose my number. |
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 8:17:46 PM CDT
James was your Moses? Right on James! We can forgive him for losing your number.
Lady, I've had a few girlfriends call me for airlifts. Two called from the guy's closet and one called because she couldn't figure out how to sneak out of the dude's house. Greg answered that call. |
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 10:14:13 PM CDT
Let James tell it, I was NEVER satisfied until he "got all in my shit" making me speak in tongues
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 10:36:02 PM CDT
He might be right, you naughty girl...
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 6:48:32 PM CDT
Great blog! Unfortunatley most of us are blessed with a pretty 'O" faces. I don't even want to think about mine. lol! I'll admit I myself am guilty of the silent but dealdly" thing . I don't know why for whatever reason I don't get lound or do much screaming and grunting durring sex. I just go into low moans few soft unintelligible words followed by a slight convulsion. But trust just because I might not as boisterous about it as other woman doesn't mean I diddn't enjoy the orgasm any less. So I will guess the same is true with men who might be gulty of the "Deadly but Silent". You can believe them when they say it was good! lol!
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 8:25:01 PM CDT
Some folks are just quiet during sex. I have quiet orgasms. I guess it's odd when the guy ask "Was it good?" or doesn't say anything then rolls off back to his corner of the bed/floor/other surface used for screwing.
The funniest 'O' Face I've seen came from the macho screamer. LARWD! |
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 9:05:56 PM CDT
Yeah I guess it does seems odd for guys. I dated a guy who was definatly a "lemon head". But the the sex was amazing he could make whatever face wanted it was all good! lol!
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 10:08:07 PM CDT
Hahahaha...sometimes a girls gotta do what a girls gotta go
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said this on 21 Jun 2010 10:37:51 PM CDT
Good lovin' will make women put up with a bad 'O' face.
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said this on 23 Jun 2010 5:27:46 PM CDT
He's so quiet but I know it's coming because he starts to breath hard and pump harder, then he says "Oh God, I'm coming" then it happens. First time he did it, I was like whaaa? I wasn't sure what to think LOL. But now it's awesome I love it. I guess he just grew on me or was that in me? LOL.
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said this on 23 Jun 2010 8:44:57 PM CDT
Eugenia, that sounds about right, lol. It's the weird ones that catch us off guard. I LOVE dirty talk but at the moment of fruition none of the examples above will do. I'll laugh...not because I want to make the guy feel back...but because I'm silly. I see humor in just about everything. :)
I know, it's sad. |
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said this on 28 Jun 2010 10:00:50 PM CDT
LOL! Tracy, I have held off on commenting on this one for a while. When you sent it to me to proof, I laughed for hours! I do mean hours! Mainly because I have experienced a few of these. Let's just say it can be a little disconcerting in the end. Enough to make you want to get up and put on your clothes a quickly as possible then get a running start out the window.
But I have to admit it. It the sex is good then you can make whatever face and almost whatever sound you want to make. I absolutely draw the line at the sprinkler. The sound of water makes me have to go to the restroom. I will end by saying variety in the spice of life. If you are the Dog Whisper today can you be the Pirate or the Aspiring Porn Star tomorrow? Keep me guessing. Woo! |
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said this on 28 Jun 2010 10:15:02 PM CDT
Stephanie, I was crying laughing when I wrote it. I'm silly like that ...I kept remembering the screamers themselves and tipped over laughing. "The Sprinkler" had my dying! It was so funny. Key-key-key-key-key...
You nailed it...keep me guessing but if the "WTF?" shows up after "The Dog Whisperer" then we might have a problem. Scary! |
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said this on 28 Jun 2010 10:44:56 PM CDT
LOL! The two of us should not be left alone unsupervised...
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said this on 12 Aug 2010 11:26:02 AM CDT
Well, there's ANOTHER side to this coin, isn't there? I've seen women lose it in ways where I wasn't sure if they were having an orgasm or decompensating from lack of meds. I remember a woman who (I found this out after) - **IF** you were doing her right looked like she was having a seizure for some little while before peaking. That WILL throw you off your game. As will eye rolling OR eye-crossing that has less to do with ecstasy and more to do with wanting to call an exorcist. So, it does go both ways.
As for theatrical sounds... Once Iwas coming back from a road trip and was staying BY MYSELF at some pretty seedy truck stop motel,partially to save on funds, but mostly because the next option was 40 miles down the road and I was beat. The guy in the next room was a long haul trucker. Had his rig parked in the lot. Which confused me because he essentially had a room in that rig he was driving. Next morning I see through a slit in the curtain his wife or GF had arrived for a laundry hand-off (go figure) and some Motel shenanigans. As it was I was packed and ready to go but the walls were paper thin so I decided to stay and listen to the show. The "show" consisted of a couple of bed squeaks, one sort of whimper, one shout of "I'm coming" and that was it. I clocked it at 90 seconds. I was so disappointed *I* was pissed and I was just the bystander. So, using some props (a wet towel comes to mind) and rhythmically slamming my suitcase on the bed and headboard while doing THREE voices I gave them about a half hour of happy fun-time. Then I put my jacket on, straightened my tie and told the mythical other two I had to go - and checked out. Took my time walking to my car. I'm pretty sure they clocked me leaving and probably spent the rest of the morning waiting for the other two to check out. Take away is make your fun where you find it. - Barney |
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said this on 12 Aug 2010 11:47:10 AM CDT
OMG! You have no idea how screwed up some of our orgasms are. I did a blog about my own a few months ago...which sparked this post. :) I was once held at the mercy of my gf's orgasm. Boy, talk about odd. Your experience sounds funny as hell though. LOL!
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said this on 12 Aug 2010 11:59:27 AM CDT
I've been reading through the blog but haven't hit that one yet. Also I am TRYING not to overrun this forum with my blather. But talking to smart women about sex is like putting me at Pacino's desk in the last scene of SCARFACE.
Man, I could write a novella about women getting C-R-A-Z-Y during sex - but not in a hot, sexy way. And even I wouldn't want to read it. No lol's there unfortunately. |
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said this on 12 Aug 2010 12:07:53 PM CDT
http://www.interracialero tica.net/erotica/blogs/42 6/The-One-Where-Tracy-Tal ks-About-Her-Orgasms.html
There you go! It's not pretty. :) Please talk all you want. We love chatting with one another. We'll be your coke. If we are nothing here, we are open minded and love to laugh. HELLO! I talk about everything! So please pen a story. |
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said this on 12 Aug 2010 12:17:01 PM CDT
***IF*** I write about the two women I'm thinking about that wouldn't be for this forum. It's too weird for public consumption. Rather easier to hone into horror fiction.
As for penning a story, your current contest was... noted. |
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said this on 12 Aug 2010 12:29:04 PM CDT
Cool! Go for it.
I think all of us have sexual horror stories. |
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said this on 12 Aug 2010 12:32:40 PM CDT
More on THAT thread tonight after my work day is done. Meanwhile I'm just gonna call bullshit. No way you having some nerve-shattering orgasm wouldn't be pretty.
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said this on 13 Aug 2010 1:52:54 PM CDT
Olga disbelieved I actually did this. The tricky part is standing next to the bed (to the left) with the luggage on the mattress AND against the head board so when you rhythmically shake the bed and bang the cheap headboard against the un-firecoded paper thin double sheet drywall at the same time WHILE with the left hand you take the pre-soaked bath towel and slap it against the surface of the dresser - changing up the rotation and degree of force.
I'm not sure all of my grunting and falsetto moaning and (near the end of the half hour) girlish screaming were all that convincing. But I figure anyone who will drive across town and do laundry for a 90 second fuck MUST be gullible. |
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